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He started to get lost in his memories when he heard the guards start to search through the crowds, "He must have gone this way! Their is no other exit from the market place then here." "What!" Thought Ivan, "There has to be another way out of here!" He started to look around and found a ladder leading to the rooftops. He was almost there when suddenly a shout rang out. "There he is! Hes heading for that ladder someone stop him!" He began to run knowing that once he reached the ladder he would only have a short time before someone got there and started climbing up. He reached the ladder and made it to the top in a suprisingly short amount of time. He looked down and saw five armoured guards that were headed to the ladder. "They'll never reach me in time." He thought.
He began thinking about how this all had started. It was only a short month ago when the guards became informed that he had to be caught. He was in his late teens around eighteen or nineteen. He was about six feet high, he had long blonde hair with red tips and streaks. He also had an athletic build and had decent control over his emotons, often loking indifferent or sometimes uncaring. But that wasn't always true, he had someone that he cared about... but no more. Everything he loved or cared about was gone. The Secret Order had been chasing him since he was sixteen because of all the trouble he might cause or become. They started with his parents, interrogating them and then torturing them slowly to their death, Just so they could get all the informationt hey could. Then they moved onto his friends and family members that he had left. The last thing he saw of anyone he cared about, was his sister being dragged off by thugs of the Secret Order. He snapped back into reality when he noticed that one of the guards had reached the ladder. "Better get out of here." He thought. He ran through the rooftops often stopping and waiting for some sighn that an ambush might be waiting ahead. He finalymade it to his destination, The Hole. His father had been telling him ever since he was a little kid about The Hole. His father had always thought that there must be someway out of the city. Someway that he might be able to get free, even though the guards and the Secret Order always punished those that thought like him. The Hole is a small gap that is on the Wall, it is always coverd with a thin layer of clay that is easy to break, it must always stay hidden or the Order will fix it and then there will never be a hope for the people trapped within the city. Once you crawled out of the Hole the first thing you saw and heard was the sound of a roaring water fall. Atleast 100 feet tall and about 60 feet wide. And once you stopped gazing at that you saw a lushus forest filled with wild life and tree and plants of everykind. The next thing you saw was a campsite with many supplies and weapons. He had been always prepared in case someone discoverd him and the Hole. He had some partners that he convinced there was a Hole and showed them the way out. Their names were Ivan (The leader and main character), Ethan, Shadow, Jaob and, Nathan. They each had their different responsibilities to make sure they never got caught and to keep each other alive. Ivan had to keep watch on the guards and make sure everyone got what they needed. Ethan had to keep the weapons sharp and ready, and to teach the others how to fight. Shadow helped watch the guards and he did sabotage missions and helped hunt and find game. Jaob was Ethan's brother and he also was skilled with weopons but his favore was ranged ones, from bow to throwing knives and everyhting inbetween. Nathan has one of the most important jobs and skills, he is an excellent cook and he is also able to treat any kind of wound. Together this little band has been keeping the Secret Order at bay and is trying t find a way to free the people of the city.
Ivan yawned, then sat up, the first thing he noticed was that his muscles were sore, "sleeping on these mats is getting more uncomfortable everyday" He thought. The next thing he noticed was the lack of commotion, usually Nathan was cooking breakfast and Ethan and Shadow were argueing over who got the first meal. He grabbed his sword and sheath, then put a small dagger into his belt. He opened the tent flap cautiously, he saw the fire going and he smelled something sweet. He moved out the tent and before he could do anything there was a bag over his head. "Crap!" he thought. "The Order found us!". "Relax Ivan!! Ha Ha" He heard a familar voice say. "Nathan?! Is that you?! Why in the blazes did you put a bag on top of me?!" Ivan yelled. "Ha ha ha, All in good time Ivan, now get walking before i start jabbing." Nathan chuckled.
After walking for what seemed an eternity to Ivan, Nathan finally took the bag off the top of his head. The light hurt his eyes for a second then when he was finally able to see clearly. He looked around at his surroundings. The first thing he noticed was all of his friends, The second thing he noticed was the cake sitting on a handmade table with a single chair pulled up to it. "Go on." His friends said, "Its your birthday and this is our surprise for you." Said shadow with a big grin on his face. Ivan walked up to the table and sat down, he looked at the cake and realized that his friend had done everything for him. They chose his favorite cake, knew exactly how old he was and even had the right type of icing. "Here yah go Ivan." Said Nathan as he set down a big box. "All of us got you a gift and we didnt have time to wrap them all so we just put them all in here." Ivan looked around and then started opening the box. The first thing he saw was a brand new katana. "Wow, this is... amazing... where did you get it?" Shadow stepped forward and said, "Well, i was doing some recon the other day, and i just happened to come by a dealer who was offering a great price on it.... Free." Said Shadow with a laugh. "Its excelent... I've never seen a blade quite like this one before.." The blade itself was slightly curved and had a dragon design on the handle. There were strange symbol son the blade that looked strangely familiar. "Alirghty now, time for the next present." Said Nathan. Ivan looked into the box and pulled out a small black suit.
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